http://www.xolagrafik.com/lucha/2009/10/16/violet-passage/ the wonderful & wicked word Mon, 23 Nov 2009 16:21:28 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.xolagrafik.com/lucha/2009/10/16/violet-passage/comment-page-1/#comment-201 nezua Mon, 23 Nov 2009 16:21:28 +0000 http://www.xolagrafik.com/lucha/?p=430#comment-201 thank you, arban. thank you, arban.

]]> http://www.xolagrafik.com/lucha/2009/10/16/violet-passage/comment-page-1/#comment-200 Arban Sun, 22 Nov 2009 10:03:24 +0000 http://www.xolagrafik.com/lucha/?p=430#comment-200 WoW. Nezua, you are like a whole country to be explored! I just discovered this, it does not surprise me at all that you can write this beautifully. WoW. Nezua, you are like a whole country to be explored! I just discovered this, it does not surprise me at all that you can write this beautifully.

]]> http://www.xolagrafik.com/lucha/2009/10/16/violet-passage/comment-page-1/#comment-127 nezua Mon, 26 Oct 2009 03:10:46 +0000 http://www.xolagrafik.com/lucha/?p=430#comment-127 Thank you! I like that you notice the things I'm playing with...good eye. :) I always appreciate the thoughtful feedback. Thank you! I like that you notice the things I’m playing with…good eye. :) I always appreciate the thoughtful feedback.

]]> http://www.xolagrafik.com/lucha/2009/10/16/violet-passage/comment-page-1/#comment-125 Analisa Mon, 26 Oct 2009 02:04:05 +0000 http://www.xolagrafik.com/lucha/?p=430#comment-125 I love how the first part weaves a spell over me like a symbolist poem, then wallops you with that twist at the end. And how playful it is. I also like the way you take risks with your writing, switching from first person to third person at the end. Great transition, too...not overly jarring. You prepare the reader for it, yet the ending was a total surprise...quite daring and marvelous! I love how the first part weaves a spell over me like a symbolist poem, then wallops you with that twist at the end. And how playful it is. I also like the way you take risks with your writing, switching from first person to third person at the end. Great transition, too…not overly jarring. You prepare the reader for it, yet the ending was a total surprise…quite daring and marvelous!

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